Burnaby Library Feedback for Website + Sketches

Came across this at the Burnaby Public Library's website. Apparently, they need user feedback for the website testing. Incentive is a free mp3 player in a draw. Similiar to my project, no? Sure, the visual design is lacking, but one can consider their strategic implementation of this event.

1) Stick it on the front page of website. Under "News & Events" there's a link for further info.
2) Details are given.
3) Spread the word to friend.





Alright, their campaign design isn't exciting or glammed (is that a word?) up, but I thought it might be interesting to post. Meanwhile, I have been making a few examples on the variations of a banner ad ( or likewise) which I'll post later. Instead, here's a few ideas on improving my ad. Above, the 3 panels is the storyboard of my current ad and so I try to improve it.

(will update with picture soon)